Wednesday, September 9, 2009

Editing for Language

1. He walked through the streets.

2. The suspect sprinted across the yard.

3. The war refugees sought a haven across the border.

4. The mayor said he opposes a counsel to investigate complaints.

5. Police reported five shootings Saturday night, three were in Central Park.

6. During his 30-year career, he had covered wars in 18 countries said the reporter.

7. The project is funded by state and federal grants.

8. She earned a bachelor’s degree in journalism from Cal State Fullerton.

9. The department had abandoned the use of stun guns, many times their use resulted in lawsuits said the police chief.

10. A reporter’s typical day might consist of meeting with editors, interviewing and writing stories.

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